can some plz check my character to see if i have do

[shino2488]

for the past 4 days i have been makign a character, this is my first character and i have onli been looking into DnD for 4 days also. but i am not sure if i am doing it correctly. if u have to time plz look into my character and look for any possible errors. also plz be a bit detail for i am a newb... and very very new to this stuff.

my character can be looked at here
http://dice-gamers.com/3eprofiler/view.php?id=618

[Suleidan]

Shino,

that does seem to be a very good start... tho I did not run the stats through the char generator on thard to see if they comply with our character creation rules...


more information about character creation can be found here

http://thard.a-terra.com/index.php?page=61

What you may consider is some of the Perks and or Flaws something that the Dicegamers site would not have had to choose from.


Aside from that... the character surely looks playable....

However, only really the DM needs to know everything such as your stats, alignment, etc etc...  it is fine to share with players too, but not necessary.

for the purpose of helping to create your first ever character, however, I guess it could be a good idea.  


Your character's bio on the link was a good start...  Perhaps on this forum (reply to this topic) (character spotlight, and all) .... delve into his 'in character' life a little more.... and show a snapshot of his history, ... using perhaps some references in thardferr setting etc...

Hopefully some others will give some suggestions too...


(oh, .. and Paks and Xxian are both Aussies )